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托福作文求修改+估分(09年的一道题)Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Ajobwithmorevacationtimeisbetterthanajobwithhighsalarybutlessvacationtime.Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouropin
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托福作文求修改+估分(09年的一道题)

Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Ajobwithmorevacationtimeisbetterthanajobwithhighsalarybutlessvacationtime.Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouropinion.

Whenitcomestotheissueofwhetherweshouldchooseajobwithmorefreetimeorwithhighersalary,mostpeoplemayhaveanopinionthatweneedtoearnasmuchmoneyaswecouldinordertomakeourlivesbetter.However,thisideaissomewhatnotverypractical.Thereisnodoubtthatthosewhohaveawell-paidjobcanalwaysenjoymoreintheirmateriallives,butmorevacationtimecanprovidepeoplemoreopportunitiestoenjoytheirmentallives.

Firstofall,peoplecanhavethechancestoexperiencealotofdifferentthingsattheirvacationtime.Anincreasingnumberofpeoplebegintohaveadistanttripintheirvacations.Forinstance,IwouldliketovisitTibet,aprovincewithaspectacularlandscapeinChina,ifIhaveenoughtimetodosoduringmyholidays.Thesnowmountains,theblueskyandthesurgeoftheYangziriverinthatareaindeedappealtomealot.Ibelievethatwillbeanunforgettableandspecialexperienceformetohaveaclosecontactwiththenatureandlearnmoreaboutthelocalcultureandhistoryofthatregion,whichcanbenefitmebyexpandingmyhorizonsandknowledge.

Inaddition,thereisagrowingawareabouthowimportantitistogetfull-relaxedbeforewegobacktowork.Atworkdays,peoplecanalwayshardlyfindenoughtimetodosomesportstorelaxthemselves,buttheyareabletodosoinvacationtime.Forexample,IhaveafriendcalledLilywhohasajobwitha3-monthvacationeveryyear.Sheisverysatisfiedaboutthisvacationtimeeventhoughshecannotgetahighersalarybecauseshecanspend2hoursadaypracticingtennisathersparetime,whichmakesherbodyhealthierandhermoodmorerelaxable.Besidesdoingsports,listeningtomusic,watchingmoviesordoingsomeotherthingsareallgoodformsofrelaxation.Thosecanrefreshourmindfromlong-timebrainworksothatwecanworkevenmoreefficientlyandactivelyafterthevacations.

Finally,anotherequallycrucialaspectisthatmoreholidaytimeareneededforustoreunitewithourfamilies.Itisundeniablethatparentsalwayswanttheirchildrentomakemoremoneytoimpro

齐国元回答:
  你是28号的吗,鼓励你看看机经,我觉得机经上的作文有练习的需要,当然不是为了考试的时候用只是我觉得上面的题目很提劲,有时候觉得很难写.其实你没发现托福的作文会很计较生活的小事吗,其实很多机经上的问题就是这样的...
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