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雅思帮忙改小作文~ThischartillustratesthedifferentchoicesofaccommodationinEvoniaamongthreeagegroup17yearsoldtoover46yearsold.Intheagebetween17and19,peopleareprefertosharedrentalaccommodationandhostelaccommodat
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雅思帮忙改小作文~

ThischartillustratesthedifferentchoicesofaccommodationinEvoniaamongthreeagegroup17yearsoldtoover46yearsold.

Intheagebetween17and19,peopleareprefertosharedrentalaccommodationandhostelaccommodation,whichareaccountsfor35%and30%respectively,only2%ofpeoplelivingintheirownhouse.However,therearealmostaquarterofpeoplewholivingintheirownhouse,whichfollowthe36%ofpeoplewholivinginownapartment.Inthepeoplewhoare46yearsoldandover,themostpopularaccommodationisownapartmentwith33%,whichwasfollowedbyownhousewith31%andthen20%ofhostelaccommodation.Inaddition,thereare13%ofpeoplewholivinginassistedliving,andtheleastpopularaccommodationissharedrentalaccommodationfor46yearsoldandoverpeople.

Overall,thegraphshowsthatmostyoungpeopledon'thavetheirownhouse,whilethemajorityofmiddle-agedpeopleandoldpeoplecanbuytheirwonaccommodation.

看看能有多少分……

晨哲生回答:
  5分吧不是打击你,错误挺多的先说优点啊,你对小作文整体把握不错,知道用长难句,结构不错第一段threeagegroups-第二段有prefer就不要are,prefertodo不是edaccount那里一样的错误,有实义动词就别出be2%那里li...
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