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ThischartillustratesthedifferentchoicesofaccommodationinEvoniaamongthreeagegroup17yearsoldtoover46yearsold.
Intheagebetween17and19,peopleareprefertosharedrentalaccommodationandhostelaccommodation,whichareaccountsfor35%and30%respectively,only2%ofpeoplelivingintheirownhouse.However,therearealmostaquarterofpeoplewholivingintheirownhouse,whichfollowthe36%ofpeoplewholivinginownapartment.Inthepeoplewhoare46yearsoldandover,themostpopularaccommodationisownapartmentwith33%,whichwasfollowedbyownhousewith31%andthen20%ofhostelaccommodation.Inaddition,thereare13%ofpeoplewholivinginassistedliving,andtheleastpopularaccommodationissharedrentalaccommodationfor46yearsoldandoverpeople.
Overall,thegraphshowsthatmostyoungpeopledon'thavetheirownhouse,whilethemajorityofmiddle-agedpeopleandoldpeoplecanbuytheirwonaccommodation.
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