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雅思作文求批改~本人语法基础很差,希望高手指点……特别是语法方面的……Therehasbeenmuchdiscussionrevolvingaroundtheissueofwhetherapersonneedtobecometrulysuccessfulcannotbelearnedatuniversityorin
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雅思作文求批改~本人语法基础很差,希望高手指点……特别是语法方面的……

Therehasbeenmuchdiscussionrevolvingaroundtheissueofwhetherapersonneedtobecometrulysuccessfulcannotbelearnedatuniversityorinasimilareducationalinstitution.Inthisessay,Iwillcompareandcontrasttwotypicalopinionsregardingthisissue.

Therearesomesoundreasonsforpeopletobelievethatapersoncangetsuccesswithoutgoingtocollege.AsfarasIamconcerned,thisviewmaybebasedontheconsiderationthatafewschooldropout(orneveracceptedthecollegeeducation)personsgetastaggeringsuccess,forinstanceSteveJobsandBillGates.Theycreatedtheircompanyandensuredthecompanysuccessivevictoriesevenchangedourworld.Moreover,itiswidelyacceptablethattheworldtransformedsoquicklythatwecanhardlyfollowingtheregularpatternoftheeconomicmarket,theknowledgewestudyinuniversityalwaysbehysteretic,whenwegraduatefromschooltheknowledgewelearnedmanybeeliminated,especially,inhigh-techindustriesascomputersortelecommunications.Anotherargumentthatcanbeusedtosupporttheirbeliefismostofthegraduatesareengageinworkareawhichisnotthemajortheystudiedinschool.ThecompetitioninjobhuntingisfierceinanyofthecitiesofChina,soithasbeenverydifficulttofindadecentjob.

Bycontrast,someothermayclaimthatstudyinuniversityorasimilareducationalinstitutionisnecessaryforpeopletogettrulysuccessful.Themainreasonfortheirviewisobviously—learnincollegeisanexperiencewhichcangivestudentssomeunforgettablememoriseofstudy,thereforetheymustlearnbythemselves,workwithothersandadapttothesituation,schoolingteachthemskillsbeforetheygetintothesociety.ButIhavetosaythisdoesnotsoundveryconvincingsinceallsuccessfulmenhaveaneducation.Somegotitwithoutgoingtoschoolandsomegotitaftergoingtoschool.

Havingconsideredtherespectivemeritsofbothviews,Ithinkpeoplecangetsuccesswithoutuniversityeducation.AlsoIsuggestyoungpeopleshouldgotoschoollearnsomebasicscientificknowledge,Inordertoliveabetterlifeinsociety.

李庆艳回答:
  你还是去新东方批改网让外教改,我也试偶然发现的,上传了自己的第一篇雅思作文,第二天发现居然半夜一点多就给我改好了,而且精细无比.一看自己的作文,拼写呀,标点呀,论证呀,缺点一目了然.看来备考这些天我要天天泡在批改网上了.
胡卫民回答:
  听说要钱来着……
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