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Asagreatmindoncesaidlifeisaprocessofpursuitinghappiness.ofcourseeveryonewouldaskhimselfwhatthehappinessitis.Bothofusarewillingtodevoteallourlifetothiscareer.Howerer.Ibelieveitisverydifficulttospotacommonanswerforthesequestion,Becauseeveryonehashisownnorminhismind.
Isuppose,obviouslywhetherweconsiderourlifetobehappinesslargelydependonwherewehavebeenbroughup.forthesimplereaseonthatdiffererntareashavedifferentlifehabbitsforinstanceifyoulivedinsouthofChinayoumayregardfishasadelicacy.onthecountryifyoulivedinnorthyoustomatchwouldturnatthesightoffish.thesecondpointishouldmentionislove.Livingwithyourloveisalsoanessentialpartofhappiness.Ithasbeensiadthatcomparingwithpeoplewhohadgotmarriedtherateofsuddendiedisquitelowerthanthosewhohadnevermarried.thirdlytheelementofhappinessalsoincludedpowerfulcareer.inparticularforthemale.youkown,theymustundertakethedutyofthefamily.
Fromwhatihavediscussedaboveyoucanfindlove.career.suitableliftstylearethemainpointsofhappinesslifehowever,sometimesHardrealisticmaynotgiveyourrighttochooseyoulifestyle.Perhapsyoumayfeeldismayifyouareineconomiccrisis.butIstillbelieveeveryone'slifecanbeverymeaningful.aslongasyoucanputyourmindinit.