DearPresident,
MynameisLiMing,ajuniorfromtheCivilEngineeringSchool.Iamwritingtomakeacomplaintaboutthecanteenserviceofourschool.(点明书信目的)
Thefocusofthecomplaintisthepoorqualityandhighpriceofthefood.Inthefirstplace,thericeisveryhard,thesteambreadisoftencold,andthevegetablesarealwaysovercooked.Inaddition,thepriceofthefoodissohighthatmanypoorstudentsareburdenedheavily.【高分句型一】Underthesecircumstances,Ifinditimpossibleforusstudentstofullyconcentrateonthestudyandenjoythecampuslife.(投诉的问题)
Iwillbeveryobligedifyoucanconsidermycomplaintseriously.Idohopetheserviceofthecanteenwillbemuchimprovedassoonaspossible.【高分句型二】Thankyouforyourtimeandkindconsideration.(表示感谢)
Yourssincerely,
LiMing