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求高手对这篇六级作文进行修改,给出一些修改意见也可以,比如替换一些高分词汇啊,修改一下句型结构啊Inrecentyears,anincreasingnumberofpeoplearebeginningtonoticethatwhethertheThreeGeorgesDamisgoo
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求高手对这篇六级作文进行修改,给出一些修改意见也可以,比如替换一些高分词汇啊,修改一下句型结构啊

Inrecentyears,anincreasingnumberofpeoplearebeginningtonoticethatwhethertheThreeGeorgesDamisgoodorbad,especiallyamongtheyoungandheateddebatesarerightontheirway.ManyexpertspointoutthatthedroughtintheYangtzeRiveriscausedbytheChainreactionoftheThreeGeorgesDam,whichledtoalossover1billion$.Thereisnodenyingthefactthatdroughtisaseriousproblem:thecountryauthoritiesshouldtakestrongmeasurestodealwithit.

Peopleholddifferentviewstowardthisphenomenon.Somebelievethatthereareeconomicbenefitssuchasfloodcontrolandhydroelectricpower.Whilesomeotherprotestvigorously.Intheirpoints,thebenefitsarereallyridiculousandharmful.Foronething,theyareconcernaboutthelossofmanyvaluablearchaeologicalandculturalsites,foranother,theenvironmentaldisruptionthedamwillcause.

Inmyview,theThreeGeorgesDamhasitsownreferencevalues.However,justlikeeverythinghasbothitsgoodandbadsides,italsohasitsowndisadvantages,suchasthepollutionandtheecologicalproblems.Weshoulddosomethingsuchasplantingmoretrees,adjustingtheworkingtimeofthesluicetoimprovethepresentsituation.Inaword,thewholesocietyshouldpaycloseattentiontotheproblemofthedam,onlyinthiswaycanweseeabettersituationinthefuture.

怎么就没人来回答呢?

刘卫平回答:
  1.floodcontrol应该不属于economicbenefits吧   2.vigorously意为精力旺盛地,不适合做protest的状语   3.paragraph2第三行,"theyareconcernabout..."中concern应改为concerned,系动词后明显不应有其他动词   4.谈及三峡的disadvantage时作者提到pollution,个人认为作为水利工程不会带来明显的污染问题,改为geology(地质的)或许更贴切
何宝庆回答:
  1、economicbenefitssuchasfloodcontrolandhydroelectricpower来自百度文库“TheThreeGeorgesDam”洪水会带来经济损失,能控制洪水,属于economicbenefits。2、Whilesomeotherprotestvigorously这句话来自沪江版英语标准作文,我会再找几个英语好的同学问下看看;3、这句话的修改我完全介绍,非常感谢。4、三峡带来的污染问题,百度里一搜索一大堆,不过地质问题也是有的,所以我决定加上地质问题。
刘卫平回答:
  好吧,以上完全是个人观点,同意作者认为floodcontrol带来economicbenefits另外这句话没看懂:especiallyamongtheyoungandheateddebatesarerightontheirway.(第二行)如果especiallyamongtheyoung是为了修饰前文的anincreasingnumberofpeople,那么个人认为为了避免歧义应该在young后面断句比较好
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