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SAT作文这样写可以吗?[Whatmotivatepeopletochange?FromOGtest1]MyfamilyislocatedintheYangtzeRiver.Onedayatdusk,whenIwasonarockingchairenjoyingthefreshairandthemagazinewhenIsuddenlyranovermybrother,an11years
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SAT作文这样写可以吗?

[Whatmotivatepeopletochange?FromOGtest1]

MyfamilyislocatedintheYangtzeRiver.Onedayatdusk,whenIwasonarockingchairenjoyingthefreshairandthemagazinewhenIsuddenlyranovermybrother,an11yearsoldboy.”BOA,whatdoyouthinkcontributedtopeople'schanged?”“What?Whydidyousuddenlyaskingsuchaquestion?”Iwasverysurprised.“It’shomework.Oh,Ireallydonotunderstandthat…..”“Allright”Iquestionedhisteachersecretlyinmyheart,whilesympathetictomybrother,butIknowthisisagoodopportunitytoteachhim.

“Ithinkitshouldbetherelentlessandinnatedesireforself-improvement.JustlookattheYangtzeRiver”Helookeddownmyfingers,thedirectionoftheriver”Wouldyouliketoknowwhywaterisalwaysinthestream?Youcanputwaterashuman,whilethoselower-lyingareasaretheinadequaciesofpeople.Watercontinuouslyflowtofillthelowlands,thesamegoesforpeople,theyalsoneedchangingtomakeupfortheirownshortcomings,whichisthereasonwhypeoplecontinuouslychange,waterconstantlyflow.”

Henoddedindefinitely;Iknowhewasthinkingsomething.”But…..”

“Ok,Iknow,therearetoomanyexamplesofthat,theconvincingdegreearenotstrong,right?Buthaveyouheardaboutthis?”Ishowedhimthe‘ScientificAmerican’magazineinmyhand”ofcourse,sowhat…”“Well,Imean,forthisproblem,scientistshavedonestudiesonthesame!Atthattime,scientistsstudiedthehistoryofmanyfamouspeople,andinvitedanumberontheForbesbillionaireslistcelebritiestoanexclusiveinterviewandfoundmostofthempeoplehavethehabitofprobing,theyarenotsatisfiedwiththestatusquo.Youknow,AlbertEinsteinnotsatisfiedwiththegivenNewton'slawsofmechanics,andthusproposedspecialrelativity;Wattwasnotsatisfiedwiththelevelofproductivityandthusinventedthesteamengine.Intheend,scientistshavecometowhatIjustsaidthesameconclusion.”

“That’scool!LetmynameontheForbesbillionaireslistismydreamah!”hegiggled.”Samehere,”Ismiledandthought,fortunately,thismagazineisnotinvainset.

“Butdon'tbiased,"Iadded,"Sometimespeopleareforcedtochange;thisisanothermatter,aminorityafterall.Soyoustillkeepinmindthatsomeother

沈钧毅回答:
  这种故事版的很有难度如果能写的完美无敌当然推荐但是很难达到这种境界的一般中国人还都是议论文的类似于托福的很多的例子为妙具体的可以问我啊O(∩_∩)O~
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