能将这篇短文错的地方找出来么.
Deareditor
Someyearsago,myhometownwasusedtobebeautifulplace.Thicktreesandgrasscanbeseenalloverthehills.Astimegoingby,peopledestroyedalmostthewholeforestgrowmorecrops.Tomakemattersworse,peoplelettheircattleseatupthegrass.Soyoucanonlyseewastelandinsteadgreenforestsnow.Asaresultof,whenitrains,thesoiliswasheddownthehillsandintotherives.Stronglywindsalsoblowawaythevaluablesoillieonthetopofthefields.
Ihopeallthepeoplewilltakegoodcareoftheforestesbutplantmoretreestoimproveourlivingconditions