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英语:请老师点评一下我这篇初三的作文作为中学生,我们应该怎样节约能源呢?请写一篇征文提示:1.步行、骑自行车2.节约用电,随手关掉水龙头,节约用纸3.回收废品TheadviceofsaveenergyNow,you
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英语:请老师点评一下我这篇初三的作文

作为中学生,我们应该怎样节约能源呢?请写一篇征文

提示:1.步行、骑自行车

2.节约用电,随手关掉水龙头,节约用纸

3.回收废品

Theadviceofsaveenergy

Now,youcanseethatwastingenergyeverywhere.ItmakesmuchpullotionandtheEarthhasbeenmoreandmoreilling.So,therearesomeadvicethatismadebymyselftosaveenergy.

Tostartwith,drivecarcanmakemuchCO2thatmakesEarthbehotterandhotter.Ithinkyoucanwalkorridebikesinsteaddrivingcar.

Then,power,waterandpaperalsobeenergy.So,youshouldsaveitbysavingpower,dropbyclosingwatertapandwseinglesspaper.

Atlast,rubbishcanberecycledtobeusedsecondespeciallythirdtimes!ItalsoagoodadvicethatIthink.

往狠里批,除了非常出彩的句子都不要表扬,忠言逆耳,我想要的是提高,在此谢过各位为我点评的老师们.

潘清云回答:
  Theadviceofsaveenergy(AdvicesorSuggestionsonenergysaving)   Now,youcanseethatwastingenergyeverywhere.Itmakesmuch(somuch)pullotion(pollution)andtheEarth(isgettingveryillbytheminute)hasbeenmoreandmoreilling.Sothere(here)aresomeadvicesthataremadebymyselftosaveenergy.   Tostartwith,drivecar(drivingacar)canmake(produceso)muchCO2thatmakestheEarthbecomeshotterandhotter.ThusIthinkyoucanwalkorridebikesinsteaddrivingacar.   Thenpower,waterandpaperarealso(valuable)beenergy(energies).Soyoushouldsaveitbysavingpower,saveeverydropbyclosingwatertapandwastinglesspapers.   Atlast,somerubbishcanberecycledtobeusedagainasecondtime,mightbeathirdtimetoo!thisisalsoagoodadvicethatIthink.
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