英语:请老师点评一下我这篇初三的作文
作为中学生,我们应该怎样节约能源呢?请写一篇征文
提示:1.步行、骑自行车
2.节约用电,随手关掉水龙头,节约用纸
3.回收废品
Theadviceofsaveenergy
Now,youcanseethatwastingenergyeverywhere.ItmakesmuchpullotionandtheEarthhasbeenmoreandmoreilling.So,therearesomeadvicethatismadebymyselftosaveenergy.
Tostartwith,drivecarcanmakemuchCO2thatmakesEarthbehotterandhotter.Ithinkyoucanwalkorridebikesinsteaddrivingcar.
Then,power,waterandpaperalsobeenergy.So,youshouldsaveitbysavingpower,dropbyclosingwatertapandwseinglesspaper.
Atlast,rubbishcanberecycledtobeusedsecondespeciallythirdtimes!ItalsoagoodadvicethatIthink.
往狠里批,除了非常出彩的句子都不要表扬,忠言逆耳,我想要的是提高,在此谢过各位为我点评的老师们.