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我雅思写作能考多少之前没接触过雅思写作,网上看了看各个分数段的例文,也看不出什么门道,这里高手多,我就来打算写一篇,各位前辈来看看吧.我随便看到个题目,说是学生用电脑做作业好不
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我雅思写作能考多少

之前没接触过雅思写作,网上看了看各个分数段的例文,也看不出什么门道,这里高手多,我就来打算写一篇,各位前辈来看看吧.

我随便看到个题目,说是学生用电脑做作业好不好,就写他了.

Recently,ifyougotolibraries,youwillnoticethatthenumberofstudentsusingtheirlaptopstodotheirhomeworkhasincreaseddramatically.Thishastriggeredadebateastowhetherornotstudentshouldusetheircomputerstodotheirhomework.

Firstly,therearesomeadvantagesofusingcomputerstofinishhomework.Studentscanuseinternettosearchtheirtopicinstantlywhenrequired,andusethematerialsorreferencefromthewebdirectly.Also,computeranimationandpicturescanbeaddedtothework,maketheirexplanationmoreunderstandable.

However,thenegativeeffectsoflaptoptodohomeworkisalsonoticeable.Computerscreeniseye-damaging,andtheradiationofcomputersincreasesthechanceofcomputer-relateddeceases.Distractioncausedbycomputer,suchasgameandsocialmedia,maydistractstudentsfromdoingtheirwork.Andtheuseofauto-correctionduringtypingcanalsodeterioratestudents'abilitiestospellvocabularycorrectly.

Therearebothadvantagesanddisadvantagesofstudentsusingcomputertodohomework.Iwouldrecommendmaturestudentstousecomputertodotheirhomeworkwhileyoungerstudentsshouldstillusethetraditionalwayofdoinghomeworkandsomedegreeofparentalcontrolisrequiredwhenusecomputers

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拾华杰回答:
  格式不错条例清晰逻辑明确.   但是看不到好词汇啊怎么还有firstly,however,多用nevertheless这类的吧   句式变化太少了.   可能是5分左右吧.   建议你找个老师系统改善吧,大眼一扫可改的地方好多.用时有些长了,而且这个话题是N年前的了吧.   摸板句太明显了.   加油.
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