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剑桥7test1大作文,求大神改一改Oneoftheburningproblemsfacingoursocietyiswhethersomechildrenarebornwithtalentwhileothersarenotoranychildcanbetaughttobegoodatsomething.Differentopinionswillbeshowedasfollow
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剑桥7test1大作文,求大神改一改

Oneoftheburningproblemsfacingoursocietyiswhethersomechildrenarebornwithtalentwhileothersarenotoranychildcanbetaughttobegoodatsomething.Differentopinionswillbeshowedasfollows.

Somepeoplesupportthattalentaregivenrandomlyandithasnothingtodowiththelatereducation.Actuallyourcharacterisdesignedbyourgenetosomeextendsothatdifferentpeoplehaveuniqueadvantages.Butgeneneverspeaks.Ifwewanttoknowthesecreteofourselves,weneedaspecialtool,whichisnowcallededucation.Thereforelatereducationisjustamethodtofindoutwhatchildrenarereallygoodat.

Thenotherpeopleholdaviewthatpracticemakesperfect.Sometimeshardworkingcanmakeupforyourshortcomingsandevenhelpyoubecomeoutstanding.Andthepurposeofeducationistomakepeoplebettertrainedandskilled.

Howeverinmyopinionbothsideshaveconvincingreasons.Wearebornwithstrongpointanddisadvantagesandsomewillkeepcompanywithusforourwholelife.Butthatdoesn’tmeanwehavenochancetochangethat.Inotherwords,wecanmakeeffortstomakeupforwhatwearenotsatisfiedandstrengthouradvantages.Iguessgreatpeopleissomeonewithinnatetalentandcontinuoushardworking.

Allinall,theissueisstillmysteriousandwecan’tfigureouteitherismorereasonable.Althoughwecan’tchooseourtalent,wecanbeseriousaboutthelaterstudyandtryourbesttobemoretalented.

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  Oneoftheburningproblemsfacingoursocietyiswhethersomechildrenarebornwithtalentwhileothersarenotoranychildcanbetaughttobegoodatsomething.Differentopinionswillbeshowedasfollows.   Somepeoplesupportthattalent(is)givenrandomlyandithasnothingtodowiththelatereducation.Actuallyourcharacterisdesignedbyourgenetosomeextend(so)differentpeoplehaveuniqueadvantage(anddisadvantages).Butgeneneverspeaks.Ifwewanttoknowthesecreteofourselves,weneedaspecialtool,whichisnowcallededucation.Thereforelatereducationisjustamethodtofindoutwhatchildrenarereallygoodat.   Thenotherpeopleholdaviewthatpracticemakesperfect.Sometimeshardworkingcanmakeupforyourshortcomingsandevenhelpyoubecomeoutstanding.Andthepurposeofeducationistomakepeoplebettertrainedandskilled.   (However,)inmyopinionbothsideshaveconvincingreasons.Wearebornwith(strongpoints)anddisadvantagesandsomewillkeepcompanywithusforourwholelife.But(it)doesn’tmeanwehavenochancetochange(them).Inotherwords,wecanmakeeffortstomakeupforwhatwearenotsatisfiedand(strengthen)ouradvantages.I(think)greatpeople(arethose)withinnatetalentandcontinuoushardworking.   Allinall,theissueisstill(arguable)andwecan’tfigureout(which)ismoreresonable.Althoughwecan’tchooseourtalent,wecanbeseriousaboutthelaterstudyandtryourbesttobemoretalented.
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