老师说我这封推荐信,有点语法问题,因为是我自己写的,然后我现在不知道哪错了,所以请给位大侠帮帮忙以下就是推荐信,如果能帮我写的更好,那再好不过了,RecommendationLetterTowhomitmayconcern,-保卡通问答

老师说我这封推荐信,有点语法问题,因为是我自己写的,然后我现在不知道哪错了,所以请给位大侠帮帮忙以下就是推荐信,如果能帮我写的更好,那再好不过了,RecommendationLetterTowhomitmayconcern,

更新时间： 2025-08-23 08:32:15

2人问答

问题描述：

老师说我这封推荐信,有点语法问题,因为是我自己写的,然后我现在不知道哪错了,所以请给位大侠帮帮忙

以下就是推荐信,如果能帮我写的更好,那再好不过了,

RecommendationLetter

Towhomitmayconcern,

HereistorecommendtoyouMr.ChenJianzhi,myformerstudent,foradmissiontoyourschoolaswellassomefinancialaid.

Mr.Chenwasonceoneofmystudentsinmyclassduring2007-2010whenhewasintheNo.8HighSchoolofHengyangCity,HunanProvince,China.

MostChinesestudentsthinkEnglishcourseissodull,whileMr.ChenissointerestedinEnglishthatheenjoysEnglishmusic,movie,andhewantstoknowwesterncountryculture,heoftenaskmeaboutEnglishissue,Heimpressedmealsobyhisself-studycapability.Heexhibitedakeenlywhettedmindduringclassdiscussions.ButInoticedhemadeapointofworkingespeciallyhardinimprovinghisEnglishduringhisthreeyearswithus.Bynow,hewantstogoingabroadtofurtherHiseducation.

InmyexperiencewithMr.Chen,Iwasimpressedwithnotonlyhisextraordinaryintelligencebutalsohisambitionsandpersistence.HealsoshowedgreatinterestinmyEnglishcourse,andoftendelightedhimselfbyreadingvariousEnglishmagazinesandnewspapers.Asaconsequence,hisEnglishimprovedalot,whichpaveshiswayforhislaterstudyinbothhismajorsubjectanditsrelatedfields.Withthislanguagecompetenceforhisaid,Ibelievethathecanhandlehisfuturestudiesabroadwithease.

AndasIknow,hewasonceaquitegoodfootballplayer.Throughtheireffortsandteamspirit,andobtainthethirdcitygame.

Therefore,thisismyopinionofMr.ChenJianzhiandIstronglyrecommendhimtoyou.

YoursSincerely

LangfenZhang

EnglishTeacher

No.8HighSchool,HengyangCity,HunanProvince,China

那个Inmyperiencewith那个地方是一段,andasknow那是一段,therefore那是一段

林英回答：

网友采纳

　　Towhomitmayconcerned, 　　HereIrecommendtoyouMr.ChenJianzhi,oneofmyformerstudents,fortheadmissiontoyourschoolandsomefinancialaid.（这句话逻辑不对,一般申请高校,助学金不是老师来提出的）　　Mr.Chenwas（was已经是过去没必要用once啊,而且这句话和第一段重复可以删掉的,外国人不喜欢这么繁琐的申请信,是我学生自然在我的课堂上啊,太重复了）（oneofmystudents省去）inmyclassduring2007-2010whenhewasintheNo.8HighSchoolofHengyangCity,HunanProvince,（China省去）. 　　MostChinesestudentsthoughtEnglish（course省略）isdull,whileMr.ChenwassointerestedinEnglishthatheenjoyedEnglishmusicandmovies.Hewantedtoknowmoreaboutwesternculturesaswellforheoftenaskedmeaboutrelatedquestions（issue词太大,不应用在高中生身上）.Healsoimpressedmebyhisself-learningability.Heexhibitedakeenlywhettedmindduringclassdiscussions.AndInoticedhehadmadeagreatprocessforhishardworkoninimprovinghisEnglishduringthethreeyearsofhighschool.Now,hewantstogoabroadtofurtherHisstudy. 　　Inmymemory,Iwasimpressednotonlybyhisextraordinaryintelligencebutalsobyhisambitionsandpersistence.（HealsoshowedgreatinterestinmyEnglishcourse,全删类似意思以表达过）（andoftendelightedhimselfby）换成HewastotallyintovariousEnglishmagazinesandnewspaperswhenhewasfree.Asaresult,hisEnglishimprovedrapidly,andpavedhiswayforhislaterstudyinbothhismajorandotherfields.Withhighlanguagecompetence,Ibelievethathecanhandlehisfuturestudiesabroadeasily. 　　AndalsoIheardthathewasonceaquitegoodfootballplayer.Theteamwhichhewasin,obtainedthethirdcitygamebecauseoftheireffortsandteamspirit,. 　　WhatabovearemyopinionsonMr.ChenJianzhiandIstronglyrecommendhimtoyou. 　　YoursSincerely 　　LangfenZhang 　　EnglishTeacher 　　No.8HighSchool,HengyangCity,HunanProvince,China 　　注意时态