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托福独立作文修改大概可以得几分Wetherweshouldmakefriendswiththeintelligentones,orwiththehumorousfriendsisaquestionthatlongdisturbssomeofus.Somepeoplemaintainthatitisbettertohavethesmartfriendsaroundbecaus
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托福独立作文修改大概可以得几分

Wetherwe

shouldmakefriendswiththeintelligentones,orwiththehumorousfriendsis

aquestionthatlongdisturbssomeofus.Somepeoplemaintainthatitis

bettertohavethesmartfriendsaroundbecausetheyarehelpfulinperfecting

oneself.Butintakingvarious

considerationsintoaccount,ibelievethatitisbettertohavefriendswith

greatsenseofhumor.Isidewiththisclaimbecauseitisinterestingtostay

withthem,andtheintelligentfriendssometimesistoosophisticated.

Thereis

acommonproblemwiththeintelligentpeople,theytendtobemore

sophisticated.Ononehandthesepeoplethinkeverythingoverandoveragainto

makesureitisbeneficialtothemselves;ontheotherhand,mighteventurn

theirbacktoyoutogainthecredits.Soisn'tittooharshtohandout

withtheintelligentoneswhoselivesis

fullofcalculation?BythisImeanitwillinevitablyjeopardizeboththe

indivisualandthegroup.

People

maythinkthatmakingfriendswiththeintelligentpeoplewillenableoneself

toimprove.However,toachievethis,ithastobeconductedundercertain

circumstances.Imagineyourarestayingwithanintelligentbutboring

friend.Herdullbehaviorboredyouverymuch.Whileyouraimistolearn

somethinggoodfromher,underthebordnessofthebehavior,theonlythingyouhaveobservedis

boredom!Whatismore,underthepurposeofmakingafriendwithpeople,isnot

therealmeaningoftherelationship.

People

oftentendtostaywiththeonewhohasasenseofhumor,becausehangging

aroundwiththemmakeonefeelrelaxed.Iwillgivemyselfastheexample.My

bestfriend,whoisveryfunny,oftentellsthejokeswhenwehadthebreak.I

oftenlaughedintotears.Thisfreemefromeverydaystressgreatly.Andthus

sooftendoIfeelluckytohavesuchafriend.Wehavebeingknowingeach

otherforyears,sheisthefirstonecomesuptomymindwheneverIfeelsad

andunhappy.

However,humorouse

friendcansometimesbe

刘颖明回答:
  写出了一种雅思作文的感觉,自己观点---对方观点----自己观点.而且你的分点太关注于一块,sophiscated和interesting.文章用词太口语化了,句式有些简单,and,also,but之类最好不要放句首.bodyparagraphs信息太少,衔接词不够,逻辑不够,例子也不specific.正规essay大忌,imagineyou,supposeyou,ifyou.考官看的是你的supportingevidence,和中文习惯不一样,一出you考官不敢直视,相同的还有托福口语里的youknow...youknow...6分我打4~4.5
罗寰回答:
  请问托福大概几分
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