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大家帮我看看这篇英语短文有没有问题RidingthehorseonthegrasslandDuringthetrip,Ialsohadanunforgettableexperience:ridingthehorseonthegrassland.ItwasthefirsttimethatIshouldridethehorsealone.Thehorsewhichwoul
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Ridingthehorseonthegrassland

Duringthetrip,Ialsohadanunforgettableexperience:ridingthehorseonthegrassland.ItwasthefirsttimethatIshouldridethehorsealone.

Thehorsewhichwouldberiddenbymewasabrownandbeautifulhorse.And,itwasverysmall,itwasthesmallesthorseIhaveeverridden.Atfirst,Iwasafraidoffallingdownfromthehorse.Iwasverynervousandcouldn’tdrawmyselfup.But,afternearlyhalfanhourforpracticing,Iknewhowtorideahorse.Ibegantoridethehorseandenjoyedthewarmsunshinehappily.

Ihadagoodtimeonthegrassland.Whatahappylifethepeopletherehave!

Theendofthesummerholiday

Summerholidaywillbefinishedsoon.Thehomeworkhasalmostfinished.Duringthesummerholiday,Ilearntalot,broadenmymindbytravellingandhelpothersbydoingthevoleenteerwork.Now,it’stheendofthesummerholiday,anewtermiscoming.Thefirstthingofthenewtermisthetestwhichcandetectionourhomework.

IhopeIcanhaveaninterestingnewterm.Letcheerforit!

梁立伟回答:
  Ridingthehorseonthegrassland   Duringthetrip,Ialsohadanunforgettableexperience:ridingthehorseonthegrassland.ItwasthefirsttimeIrodethehorsealone.   Thehorsewhichwouldberiddenbymewasabrown(and去掉)beautifulhorse.And,itwasverysmall,itwasthesmallesthorseIhaveeverridden..Atfirst,Iwasafraidoffallingdownfromthehorse.Iwasverynervousandcouldn’tdrawmyselfup.But,afternearlyhalfanhourfor(of)practicing(practice),Iknewhowtorideahorse.Ibegantoridethehorseandenjoyedthewarmsunshinehappily.   Ihadagoodtimeonthegrassland.Whatahappylifethepeopletherehave!
杜茂康回答:
  你告诉我在那里改了
梁立伟回答:
  我晕,最前面一段有一点修改,后面的我加括号了,
杜茂康回答:
  麻烦第二段也帮我看看
梁立伟回答:
  TheendofthesummerholidaySummerholidaywill(befinished)改成OVERsoon.Thehomeworkhasalmost(加上been)finished.Duringthesummerholiday,Ilearntalot,broadenmymindbytravellingandhelp(此处加,ed是过去对吧)others(by)改成todo(doing去掉)work(加上asavolunteer此处是我帮你改的,我觉得这样比较好).Now,it’stheendofthesummerholiday,anewtermiscoming.Thefirstthingofthenewtermisthetestwhichcandetection(这个要用动词detect)ourhomework.IhopeIcanhaveaninterestingnewterm.Let(加上'S)cheerforit!
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