谁能帮我看看这篇英语作文(初一作文)有没有错误,再教教我怎么改?求指导今晚6点前要~
MyFavoriteAnimal
ThisisJodie.Heistenyeasold.Heisaleopard.They’remyfavoriteanimal.Theanimalofthecatfamily,withyellowfurandblackspots.They'recomefromAfica.Helikestoeatmeatsverymuch.
Hecanrunfast,soleoplethinkheis"dashchampion".Somepeopledon'tlikethem,becausethey'reveryscary.ButIlikethembest,becausethey'reverycoolandnoble.
Doyoulikethem?Whatanimaldoyoulike?