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请英语高手帮我检查下这篇文章哪里写的不好Istillrememberthefirstdayinmycollege.Thatwasasunnyday.WiththemixtureofcuriosityandjoyIwentintomycampus.Therearebeautifultreeswithgreenleavesshininginthesuns
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请英语高手帮我检查下这篇文章哪里写的不好

Istillrememberthefirstdayinmycollege.Thatwasasunnyday.WiththemixtureofcuriosityandjoyIwentintomycampus.Therearebeautifultreeswithgreenleavesshininginthesunshine.Thesunshiningthroughtheleavesdappledtheground.Iwalkalongthepathsintothecampus.Allthingsweresobeautiful.Thetrees,theriver,theteachingbuildingandtheplaygroundallwerecoveredbythebeautifulsunshine.

Graduallymoreandmorepeoplepresentedtothecampus.Thesametometheyarealsothefreshmen.Wealllookedforwardtoourcampuslife.Everybodywasbusywiththeirthingsaboutenrollmentwithsmiling.Underseniors’helpIcompletedmythings.ThenIfollowedtheseniortocometomydormitorywithpleasure.Butthebedraggledbuildingmakesmedisappointed.onenteringthedormitorywithlittledisappointmentImet5smilingfacesthatgreetedmewarmlywhichmakemeprettyamazedanddelight.Weintroducedeachotheratfirstsight.Inashorttimewetalkedandlaughedwithoutanyembarrassment.ItmakesmehappythatIcangetalongwellwithmyroommates.

Intheafternoon,thecounselorshowsusabouttheschool.Andsomeseniorstellustheirexperienceabouttheirlifeintheseyears.Wheneverweneedhelp,somegiveusahand.Ifeel

Ijoinedabigfamily.IknewfurtherlifeshouldbenotallrosesincollegewhatIlearnfrommyfirstdayincollege,butweshouldlearnhowtofacethetroubleandtosettletheproblem.Thecollegeisasmallsociety,soIshouldlearnsomeabilitytoequipmyselfinhere.NowIamajunior.Ireallylearnedalotofthingduringthesetowyears.

官建国回答:
  就看最后一段~learn~ability不好吧~应该是train~ablility~而且some后面是ablilities吧~其实最好还是用skills上面的trouble跟problem应该是复数吧~而且阿~中式英语严重阿~equipmyself有这么说的么?要穿上装甲打仗?...
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