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Istillrememberthefirstdayinmycollege.Thatwasasunnyday.WiththemixtureofcuriosityandjoyIwentintomycampus.Therearebeautifultreeswithgreenleavesshininginthesunshine.Thesunshiningthroughtheleavesdappledtheground.Iwalkalongthepathsintothecampus.Allthingsweresobeautiful.Thetrees,theriver,theteachingbuildingandtheplaygroundallwerecoveredbythebeautifulsunshine.
Graduallymoreandmorepeoplepresentedtothecampus.Thesametometheyarealsothefreshmen.Wealllookedforwardtoourcampuslife.Everybodywasbusywiththeirthingsaboutenrollmentwithsmiling.Underseniors’helpIcompletedmythings.ThenIfollowedtheseniortocometomydormitorywithpleasure.Butthebedraggledbuildingmakesmedisappointed.onenteringthedormitorywithlittledisappointmentImet5smilingfacesthatgreetedmewarmlywhichmakemeprettyamazedanddelight.Weintroducedeachotheratfirstsight.Inashorttimewetalkedandlaughedwithoutanyembarrassment.ItmakesmehappythatIcangetalongwellwithmyroommates.
Intheafternoon,thecounselorshowsusabouttheschool.Andsomeseniorstellustheirexperienceabouttheirlifeintheseyears.Wheneverweneedhelp,somegiveusahand.Ifeel
Ijoinedabigfamily.IknewfurtherlifeshouldbenotallrosesincollegewhatIlearnfrommyfirstdayincollege,butweshouldlearnhowtofacethetroubleandtosettletheproblem.Thecollegeisasmallsociety,soIshouldlearnsomeabilitytoequipmyselfinhere.NowIamajunior.Ireallylearnedalotofthingduringthesetowyears.