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(初二)帮我看看英文作文有错误么

whenwegrowing,weoftenhavesomepainsandgains.

wemustdosomehomeworkandstudyhard,andwehavelesstimetorelaxandplay.

sometimeswefeelthemveryboring.

myparentsletmeplaythepiano,butsometimesidon'tlikepiano,ilikedrawing.

theyaremypains.

butihavesomegainstoo.

nowihavelearnedmorekonwledgeangicanplaythepianoverywell.

myparentsoftentakemetoseefireworks.

theywereverybeautiful,ilovethem.

iwilltakepartinacultureartfestivalnextweek,i'mlookingforwardit,becauseiwillplaythepianoonthefestival.

毛成江回答:
  when(when改为during,因为你意思是说在成长过程中嘛)wegrowing,weoftenhavesomepainsandgains.   wemustdosomehomeworkandstudyhard,and(and改为but)wehavelesstimetorelaxandplay.   sometimeswefeelthemveryboring.(改为feelveryboringwiththem)   myparentsletmeplaythepiano,butsometimesidon'tlike(加the)piano,ilikedrawing.   theyaremypains.   butihavesomegainstoo(too可以改为atthesametime吧,因为too一般是形容同样一样事,比如说都是好事或者都是坏事,而不能用来说先坏事再好事).   nowihavelearnedmorekonwledgeang(and吧)icanplaythepianoverywell.   myparentsoftentakemetoseefireworks.   theywereverybeautiful,ilovethem.   iwilltakepartinacultureartfestivalnextweek,i'mlookingforwardit,becauseiwillplaythepianoonthefestival.
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