点评一篇英语作文.一篇初三的作文,内容基本已经写完整了,希望找出哪里有语法错误,和需要修改的地方
DearLiHua,
IamhappytohearthatyouaregoingtostudyinCanada.AndIhavesomeadviceforyou.It'salwaysabitcoldinNovemberinCanada.Soyouhadbettertakesomewarmclothes,oryouwillhaveacoldeasily.YouwilllivewithaCanadianfamily.Soremembersomehabitslikethese.First,youhavetoknockatthedoorbeforeyouentersomeone'sroom.Second,whenyouneedtousethephone,youshouldaskifyoucandothat.Third,bepolitetootherandtalkwiththemifpossible.Ifyouhavesomeimportantthings,youmustalwayscarrythemwithyouorkeeptheminthebank.It'smuchsafer.Justtakeiteasy,youwillhaveagreattime.
作文要求是这样的:我的朋友李华将要去加拿大做交流生,希望询问我一些注意事项.
上面是我写的作文,内容不要改变,希望找出不通顺的帮我修改修改,还有语法错误等.把修改的写出来.