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Externalappearancewillprovideimportantcluesofpeople
Somepeoplealwaysassertthatweshouldnotjustjudgeapersonbyhisappearance.Admittedly,weshouldnottotallymakeaconclusiontoapersonbyhisexternal.Butwe,actually,havetotakeintoaccounttheexternalsasonestandardofjudgingpeople.That'ssayexternalappearanceisimporantforones'lifeandsocialrelationship.
Firstandforemost,theexternalappearanceofpeoplewilleffecttherecognitionofothersbasically.Forinstance,youareabossofacompanyandneedtohiresomegraduatestojoinintoyourcompany.Twoguyscometotheinterview,whicharehostedbyyouandyourcolleagues.Oneisinsuitsandtiesperfectlyandanotherisindirtyclothandslipper.Whichonewillhavemorepossibilitiestopasstheinterview,iftheyareequalinbackgroundandprofessionalskills.Ithinktheanswerisabsolutelyclearthatmostoftheleaderswillchoosethefirstguyascompany'semployee.Soapparentlyourjudgementtowardspeoplewillbeeasilyinfluentedbytheexternalappearance,especiallywhenwedon'tknoweachotherbetter,eventhroughwemaybehavenotrealizedthefact.
Anothermainpointworthmentioningofmypropensityisthatwecanseetheinnertraitsofpeoplebytheexternalappearance.Somepeoplefrequentlyboasttoothershowexcellentandperfecttheyare.Howcanwetrustaguy'ssayingthoroughlywithoutaclearT-shirtsandshoes.Indailylife,wemustcommitthatthebadcustomofpersonalsanitationwillgiveusthefeelingthattheymostlylackofresponsibilityandgoodlearninghabitsetc.Thelackingsenseofsanitationwillnotinfluentonlyintheoutlookofaperson,butalsoindifferentsectionofyourlife.Youmaybelazyforeverythingyouinvolvedinandneverhavethepositiveattitudetodosomethingevenitisyourlovingpart.
FromthetwofactorsIdeliberateddeeplyabove,it'sseeminglyeasytofindoutthattheexternalappearanceissoimportantanddefinitelyinfluencedifferentpartsofourlife.Asaconclusion,weshouldcorrectssomeofourbadpersonalhabitstomakeusmoreaccessibleforthesocietyandlife.
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