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托福作文求批改,优缺点,得分我12.19一战!ExternalappearancewillprovideimportantcluesofpeopleSomepeoplealwaysassertthatweshouldnotjustjudgeapersonbyhisappearance.Admittedly,weshouldnottotallymakeaconclusionto
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托福作文求批改,优缺点,得分我12.19一战!

Externalappearancewillprovideimportantcluesofpeople

Somepeoplealwaysassertthatweshouldnotjustjudgeapersonbyhisappearance.Admittedly,weshouldnottotallymakeaconclusiontoapersonbyhisexternal.Butwe,actually,havetotakeintoaccounttheexternalsasonestandardofjudgingpeople.That'ssayexternalappearanceisimporantforones'lifeandsocialrelationship.

Firstandforemost,theexternalappearanceofpeoplewilleffecttherecognitionofothersbasically.Forinstance,youareabossofacompanyandneedtohiresomegraduatestojoinintoyourcompany.Twoguyscometotheinterview,whicharehostedbyyouandyourcolleagues.Oneisinsuitsandtiesperfectlyandanotherisindirtyclothandslipper.Whichonewillhavemorepossibilitiestopasstheinterview,iftheyareequalinbackgroundandprofessionalskills.Ithinktheanswerisabsolutelyclearthatmostoftheleaderswillchoosethefirstguyascompany'semployee.Soapparentlyourjudgementtowardspeoplewillbeeasilyinfluentedbytheexternalappearance,especiallywhenwedon'tknoweachotherbetter,eventhroughwemaybehavenotrealizedthefact.

Anothermainpointworthmentioningofmypropensityisthatwecanseetheinnertraitsofpeoplebytheexternalappearance.Somepeoplefrequentlyboasttoothershowexcellentandperfecttheyare.Howcanwetrustaguy'ssayingthoroughlywithoutaclearT-shirtsandshoes.Indailylife,wemustcommitthatthebadcustomofpersonalsanitationwillgiveusthefeelingthattheymostlylackofresponsibilityandgoodlearninghabitsetc.Thelackingsenseofsanitationwillnotinfluentonlyintheoutlookofaperson,butalsoindifferentsectionofyourlife.Youmaybelazyforeverythingyouinvolvedinandneverhavethepositiveattitudetodosomethingevenitisyourlovingpart.

FromthetwofactorsIdeliberateddeeplyabove,it'sseeminglyeasytofindoutthattheexternalappearanceissoimportantanddefinitelyinfluencedifferentpartsofourlife.Asaconclusion,weshouldcorrectssomeofourbadpersonalhabitstomakeusmoreaccessibleforthesocietyandlife.

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  1.当用people时,后面用they和their.当用person时,后面必须要用heorshe,而不能只用其中一个.总体感觉你的文章里面they和we用得比较混乱.2.用第三人称的时候,注意后面动词的形式.(也许只是你的输入错误...
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