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写了一篇作文,但是没有老师帮我改,麻烦高手帮我改改,谢谢.

Withthedevelopmentoftechnologyandinformation,wewholiveinthisage,feelmoreandmoreourlifestylesisgraduallychanged.Itbecomesfasterandmoreefficientlytogoshopping,communicatewithfriendsandsoforth.TheeducationaswellisnotconfinedintheclassroombutexpandtotheInternet.

Asweallknow,onlong-distanceeducationhasconsiderableadvantages.Butthesefollowingthreemaybeisthemostimportant.Thefirstoneisthatitnarrowsthedistancebetweentheprofessorandthestudent.Theprofessorisgivinghislectureinacity,andthestudentwhoislistentohimatthattimemaybeinanothercity,evenanothercountry.Howamazing!Thesecondoneisthatitenableeveryonewhoneedandsuittoreceivethelong-distanceeducationhastheequivalentchancetoenhancehimselfwithoutpassingsomeexamination.Thelastbutnotleastoneisthatsavingmoneyandtimeiseitheritscharacteristics.

Onlong-distanceeducationhoweverisnotsuiteveryperson.Ifonepreferreadingtogainknowledge,he'dbettergotothelibrary.Ifonewanttostudyinaco-operationsurrounding,he'dbettergototheschool.

Inaword,theattitudetothiswayoflearningvaryfromdifferentpeople.

权进国回答:
  ,feelmoreandmoreourlifestylesisgraduallychanged.___canfeelthebigchangesofourlife-styles   Itbecomesfasterandmoreefficienttogoshopping,aswellasthecommunicatewithfriends.TheeducationisnolongerconfinedintheclassroombutexpandstotheInternet.   Asweallknow,long-distanceeducationhasconsiderableadvantages.thefollowingthreemaybethemoreimportant.firstly,itnarrowsthedistancebetweentheprofessorandthestudent.Theprofessorisgivinghislectureinacity,andthestudentsaroundthecountrycanlistentohimatthattime.Howamazingitis!Thesecondoneisthatitenableeveryonewhoneedandsuittoreceivetheeducationhastheequivalentchancetoenhancehimselfwithoutpassingsomeexaminations.Thelastbutnotleast,savingmoneyandtimeisitscharacteristics.   Onlong-distanceeducation,however,isnotsuitableforeveryperson.Ifonepreferreadingtogainknowledge,he'dbettergotothelibrary.Ifonewanttostudyinaco-operationsurrounding,he'dbettergototheschool.   Inaword,theattitudetothiswayoflearningvaryfromdifferentpeople.(你的这个结论和前面的偶不搭啊,最好改成与thelong-termeducation有关的)
韩月敏回答:
  谢谢你的帮忙。这篇文章主题是''onlong-distanceeducation",要说清楚1,我们的生活方式在改变2,远程教育的优点,3远程教育并不适合每个人。这样子,怎么结尾好呢?我写的时候也感觉结尾怪怪的,可是总得结一个啊。   如果按100分算的话。我这样能得多少分呢?谢谢。
权进国回答:
  等你采纳了我的答案,我再告诉你
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