帮我看看这几段英文有没有什么错误(我写的)
是几段关于大兴安岭的文字,因为老师要求做课件
1.GreenisthespiritofTaHsing-anLing,thatistosay,itmeanslife.
Theoceanofthetreesisthemeaningofit,andtherearehundredsofanimalsandthousandsoftreeslivinghere.
Asyousee,TaHsing-anLingisjustlikeaparadiseofplants,anditistheonlypurelandnow…
2.Blueisthecolourofskyandstreams.
I’msureTaHsing-anLing’sblueismorebeautifulthanapicture.HereinTaHsing-anLing,waterhidsinforests–butitcannotstopyoutofinditsbeauty.
Herearesometouristspotforyou:
Yanzhigou(胭脂沟)
ItispartofEmu-erRiver,about14kmlong,anditisfamousforitshighproductioncapabilityofgold.Ithasbeenknownbyusformorethan100years,butyoucanstillfindgoldherenow!
Beiyinquan(北饮泉)
Youcandrinkthewaterheredirectly.Thewaterisalsogoodforyourhealth.
3.Thetimefororangeisthetimeforgains.
Ifyouwalkintotheforests,youmayfindthousandsoflovepeas(北国红豆),persimmons(柿子)andallkindsofpreciousChineseherbalmedicine.
4.Aworldinwhiteisapureworld,
Becausewhiteisthecolourofpurity.
TaHsing-anLing’swinterisjustaworldlikethis.
Youwillseethemostcleanviewshere.
Andwillbeattractedbythis.
Theamazingtrees,mountainsandlakes,
Bringyoutothetrueiceworld,
Theworldlikeadream…
谢谢了……好的话我会有追加分的,怕浪费分数……