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Televisionisplayingmoreandmoreimportantroleintoday.Butnowadays,moreandmorepeoplethinktelevisionbrokentherelationshipoffamilymembers.Ithinkthisopinionisalittleextremeviews.
IthinkwehavetoknowsomenewsfromTVeveryday.Nowthetechnologydevelopsofast.Maybesomeofushavenotimetoreadthenewsfromnewspaper.SoweshouldknowtheworldfromTV.WecanwatchTVwithourfamilymembersandwecandiscussthenewswiththem,too.SoIthinkitisagoodwaytogettogetherwiththem.
IfsomeonemustholdthatitisTVthatalienatestherelationshipoffamilymembers.Iwanttotellthem.TVisoneofallthereasons,butitisnotTVthattooksomebodyfromhisfamily.Wehaveanumberofproductionsnow.Maybecomputerormobilephoneisthereal“killer”,too.ThereasonwhysomeofusfeelTValienatedtherelationshipoffamilymembersisthatwehavenottalkedwiththemforalongtime.
Itismyopinionthatweshouldtalkandcommunicatewithourfamilymembersandfriends.Notonlytalktothem,butalsolistentothem.Thenwecanobtainmuchmorehappinessfromourfamilies.
Therefore,IdonotagreethatTVhasdestroyedcommunicationamongfamily.
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Inmoderntime,manypeoplediscusswhereweshouldgetknowledge.Someofthemthinkweshouldobtaintheknowledgefrombook.Otherssayweshouldgainknowledgefromourexperience.Well,inmyview,Ithinkexperienceismoreimportantforus.
First,peoplearelearningthroughtheirwholelife.Wecanknowhowtoeat,howtodrink,howtodressclothesandsoonfromexperience.Anditishardtounderstandthemfrombook.Thebestwaytodothesethingsisexperience.Wehavetodothesethingsbyourselves.Itisbetterthanwegetthesefrombook.
Furthermore,arealltheofbooksright?Ithinkitisnot.Forexample,thehistoryisJapanesehistorybook.Somemistakesareinthebook.Ifwebelievebooksomuch,maybewewillmakesomemistakesinthefuture.Weshouldreadbooks,butwecan’tdependonbookssomuch.Weshouldbelieveourselves,believeourrealexperience.Ourbestleadersareourrealexperience.
Inaddition,bookisbasedonexperience.Onewritesabookshouldusehisownexperience.Maybeitisnotsuiteverybody.Ever