求帮忙改第一次写的托福作文.
itmoreimportanttounderstandingideasandconceptsthanlearningaffect?内容如下:
Studentsalwaysfeelconflictonthefundamentalissuesuchaswhethertostressmoreimportanceonideasorconceptsunderstandingorfactslearningintheirdailystudylife.However,itisobviousthatweshouldtakethebalancebetweenthetwobasicparts,forideasandconceptsworktogetherwithfactstopromoteeachother,makingtheprocessoflearningmoreefficient.
Firstly,understandingofideasandconceptsmakefactsyoutakeforgrantedlearningmorecomprehensive.Somethingmaygetclearinstudents’mindsuddenlyaftertheyhavelearnedakeyconceptoridea.Forinstance,whenIwasonkindergarten,Iknewthatclimateacrossourmotherlandarequitedifferentfromregiontoregion,butitisjustacommonsensebecauseIhadvisitedtomountainsandriversalloverChinawithmyparentsandthefluctuationofclimatewasjustwhatIexperiencedmyself.However,asIgrowupandwenttomiddlehighschool,Ilearntheclimatein
geographyclass.Ibegantoknowthatmanyfactorsinfluenceclimateinanarea,makingitquitevariousfromeachother,forexample,altitude,monsoon,distancefromsea,andsoforth.Soon,itstroketomymindthatitisthereasonwhyIcanexperiencethedifferentclimateatthesametimeasItraveledacrosstheextensiveland.
Secondly,factsoftentakeimportantroletohelpideasandconceptsunderstoodmoreeasily.Whenstudentslearnfootinthedooreffectandprizingloweffectinsocialpsychologyclass,theymaybeconfusingaboutthetwostrategiesfortheirdefinitionintextbookissimilar.Bothoftheconceptsbeginwithaminorexpense.However,whenteachersremindstudentsofsalesmen’sstrategiesindailylife,thetwoconfusingconceptsbecomeunderstoodanddistinguished.Mostofushavefollowingexperience,whensomebodyaskustodoagreatfavorforhimorher,wemayrejectastheconcerningofexpenseofusown.However,ifwehavereceiptedaminorrequirement,thesamefavorthathasbeenrejectedbeforeseemstobeacceptable.Thatiswhat
so_calledfootinthedooreffect.Astoprizingloweffect,itisevenmorecommonthanthepreciousone.Ifyoudecidetobuysomethingforits’lowprizeandthenfindthereismuc